Can't depend upon Scott Joplin too much.
The flash wasn't that great, but its saving grace was the Maple Leaf Rag, among my favorite pieces of music. You need to improve your style, a lot. This will probably be blammed. I will say that I did not give it a blam-causing rating, but you can't depend upon music to make a flash good when the graphics are not.
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That was suprisingly funny.
It was funny that some dude was just chilling, waiting for the bus, grew angry when he was too dejected to get up to board the bus, and killed himself. Nice music to go along with it.
Thanks! The music is one of my favourites on the Sim City 4 soundtrack ...or at least it's one most deepest inside my head.
Thanks for the review!
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Sort of funny...
I thought that was sort of funny, but why did you have to use Scott Joplin's Maple Leaf Rag? I'm not sure if your flash was deserving of playing something by that genius composer. But w/e. Sort of funny, I guess.
I used Scott Joplin's song because I thought it would give the right feeling to the movie. thx anyway
Nice
You captured the melancholy feelings of rejection well. Too bad we must experience those emotions to express the outrageousness of being rejected by someone. Mad props for the song selection...on my top 5 favorite songs list. You've struck a chord within me with your animation, very well done.
Thank you. Some people have very positive reviews and some have just the opposite. Thank you for understanding and giving a thoughtful review.
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